本期我們給大家?guī)?lái)雅思寫作高分范文：交通與污染。這個(gè)話題是雅思寫作當(dāng)中屬于比較高頻的話題，主要是結(jié)合社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)來(lái)的，另外本文的范文連貫性比較強(qiáng)，幾乎每一句話都跟上一個(gè)句子有指代性連接，所以非常具有代表性，下面是具體的機(jī)經(jīng)資料。

劍橋雅思8~Test 3~大作文
Topic:  Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
從以下方面精讀：
1. 文章段落結(jié)構(gòu)
2. 前后指代體現(xiàn)的連貫性
3. 語(yǔ)氣的委婉和客觀

雅思官方考官范文

TEST 3,WRITING TASK 2
MODEL ANSWER
This model has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer. However please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.

There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems,both in cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.

While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution.higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long.As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport,it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads. But there are various other measures that could be implemented that would have a huge effect on these problems.

l think to tackle the problem of pollution, cleaner fuels need to be developed. The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to use.Persuading manufacturers and travellers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective strategy for improving air quality,especially in cities.

However,traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle people can use. To do this, we need to improve the choice of public
transport services available to travellers.For example, if sufficient sky trains and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordabie alternatives to driving your own car for long journeys.

in conclusion,i think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating the public to use public transport more, and on governments using public money to construct and run efficient systems.