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托福獨(dú)立寫作，提升語言表達(dá)技巧
時(shí)間：2020-07-31
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想要寫好托福作文，需要同學(xué)們圍繞考試評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)去進(jìn)行寫作，這樣的文章更符合閱卷老師的評(píng)判標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，特立獨(dú)行或者毫無章法的文章，絕大部分時(shí)候，都是失敗的，今天我們朗思教育老師給同學(xué)們整理了托福獨(dú)立寫作，提升語言表達(dá)技巧，希望對(duì)同學(xué)們的備考有所幫助！
托?？荚嚨脑u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)簡單地可以概括成三個(gè)要素：
Development
Organization
Expression
所以同學(xué)們要對(duì)于自己的文章進(jìn)行一定的提升，可以從這幾個(gè)角度來準(zhǔn)備。
那么對(duì)于語言類的考試，很多同學(xué)可能在語言的提升方面無從下手，那么看看ETS給出的對(duì)于語言的幾個(gè)要求，‘Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice and axiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors ’ 其實(shí)無非就是從句式和詞匯切入。
下面是關(guān)于語言提升的小技巧：
Avoid wordy expressions
有時(shí)候句子里出現(xiàn)很多幾乎沒有意義的一些詞會(huì)使句子的語意表達(dá)過于累贅，從而出現(xiàn)湊字?jǐn)?shù)的問題，顯得句子沒有那么concise.
例如：My decision to choose accounting as my major will lead to steady, rewarding employment.
改進(jìn)：My decision to choose Choosing accounting as my major will lead to steady, rewarding employment.
句子結(jié)構(gòu)的平行
平行結(jié)構(gòu)就是用and并列單詞、短語或是句子。在句子中添加平行結(jié)構(gòu)會(huì)使語意表達(dá)更通順流暢，同時(shí)也easier to understand.
例如：A thesis statement that is clear, strong supporting paragraphs, and a conclusion that should be interesting are all elements of a well-written essay.
改進(jìn)：A clear thesis statement that is clear, strong supporting paragraphs, and aan interesting conclusion that should be interesting are all elements of a well-written essay.
Nominalization名詞化
這個(gè)方式是使句子中的動(dòng)詞或形容詞轉(zhuǎn)換成名詞的形式，這樣會(huì)使語意的表達(dá)更加的書面。
例如：The professor refused to extend the deadline, which made the students feel annoyed.
改進(jìn)：The professor’s refusal of a deadline extension caused student annoyance.
托?？荚嚨脑u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)簡單地可以概括成三個(gè)要素：
Development
Organization
Expression
所以同學(xué)們要對(duì)于自己的文章進(jìn)行一定的提升，可以從這幾個(gè)角度來準(zhǔn)備。
那么對(duì)于語言類的考試，很多同學(xué)可能在語言的提升方面無從下手，那么看看ETS給出的對(duì)于語言的幾個(gè)要求，‘Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice and axiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors ’ 其實(shí)無非就是從句式和詞匯切入。
下面是關(guān)于語言提升的小技巧：
Avoid wordy expressions
有時(shí)候句子里出現(xiàn)很多幾乎沒有意義的一些詞會(huì)使句子的語意表達(dá)過于累贅，從而出現(xiàn)湊字?jǐn)?shù)的問題，顯得句子沒有那么concise.
例如：My decision to choose accounting as my major will lead to steady, rewarding employment.
改進(jìn)：My decision to choose Choosing accounting as my major will lead to steady, rewarding employment.
句子結(jié)構(gòu)的平行
平行結(jié)構(gòu)就是用and并列單詞、短語或是句子。在句子中添加平行結(jié)構(gòu)會(huì)使語意表達(dá)更通順流暢，同時(shí)也easier to understand.
例如：A thesis statement that is clear, strong supporting paragraphs, and a conclusion that should be interesting are all elements of a well-written essay.
改進(jìn)：A clear thesis statement that is clear, strong supporting paragraphs, and aan interesting conclusion that should be interesting are all elements of a well-written essay.
Nominalization名詞化
這個(gè)方式是使句子中的動(dòng)詞或形容詞轉(zhuǎn)換成名詞的形式，這樣會(huì)使語意的表達(dá)更加的書面。
例如：The professor refused to extend the deadline, which made the students feel annoyed.
改進(jìn)：The professor’s refusal of a deadline extension caused student annoyance.
